I think my best work is within my McCandless essay, I think my introduction is good and I did well on incorporating the naysayers to make my argument stronger. Although my introduction is good, I can make it stronger by saying why Chris is the way he is and maybe introducing his family and friends too. I am hoping to include my personal analysis essay in my english portfolio too although it needs a lot of work. I have a lot of researching to do and I think I may need to find another celebrity to incorporate into my essay. I have good ideas with my own life but I need to weave better with somebody else. Also I need to figure out what my essay is saying, the purpose of my essay. I don't think it is clear to the reader mostly because I don't really know myself.
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If the problem you are having is writing about your topic, I think you just need to research more. The more you know about your subject, the easier it becomes to write about it. I like that you acknowledge how even your good parts can be improved. Sounds like your portfolio will turn out great.
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